cool.
In the beginning, when I heard only the gated lead, I thought 'oh, it's just going to be another amateur attempt at making techno' but then the other instruments came in, I thought ' what? well thats surprising...' then gets about halfway into it and thinks 'k it's cool.' but then it progressed more and i was like ' sounds like a lot of wrong notes' :\ don't know if that was on purpose.
anyway, it was overall a decent job, with some minor problems in it.
interesting song
I like it... got a bit bored with it though, but other than that, it's a good song.
What bored you? I tried to keep it pretty intense for most of the song.
It's okay
could've used some better transitioning, but other then that, it was fairly well mastered compared to most ng songs (including mine) and it sounded great.
not sure what else to say. XD it's really nice i guess.
9/10, 4/5 It's really good for a mix of the two songs together though,
I'll break down what I thought of each point of it
overall 9/10, 4/5
composition 9/10, 4.5/5 (as in how everything sounded together)
flow 8/10, 4/5 (how well it meshed together)
melody 10/10, 5/5 (they were perfect)
basslines 9/9, 4/5
rhythm 10/10, 5/5
percussion 10/10, 5/5
hahahahahahah XD
it was so bad (yet catchy) that it was funny XD like those "amazing" vocal exercises in the beginning XD and all the random john stuff every 5 seconds. if it was a little better, it would have been worse because it wouldn't have been as funny lol
10/10, 5/5 for the humor in it.
The saddest part is that the actual bit with words at the beginning of the rap was meant to be serious, just with an accent, but I kept recording. And I thought the audio representation of me digging a hole was just too funny to not post on here.
And I'm extra pleased because this is the first proper "in-depth" review I've had off anyone before. :L
Thankyou!
It's nice
Unlike other stuff, tis is somehow remaining bouncy and light, while still feeling controlled. Don't know how you did it, but keep doing it :) also check some of my stuff out. it's a little different, but I want to see what you might have to say about some of my stuff :)
amazing :D
Just one thing though, in some parts it seems like you sped up a little bit also some transitional problems, but other than that, this song is really hard to play on guitar, and you pwnd me at playing it although some of the sounds didn't quite sound as good as the original, still good though :D 9.5/10 stars for you :)
It was really pretty :)
It was really repetitive though, and very short :(
although it is a loop, it doesn't have (perfectly timed?) loop, or it wasn't a good shift from the notes . idk if you actually recorded it or made it in a program or what so, I can't really help other then ask to make it longer, a little less repetitive, and I love how passionate and emotional it sounds, keep up the good work.
-lantaren
but maybe the looping is just because of newgrounds? idk.
Unfortunately the Newgrounds player doesn't seem consistent with the timing of the loop but I can completely understand what you're saying about the shift in notes. It is quite passionate, it was made with someone in mind :)
Perhaps I'll take the melody further but, as for now, it will have to remain repetitive. I'll try and get a live playing of this uploaded some time!
Thanks for the review :)
I love it!
much better then robotrance song surprisingly. I was really amazed with it - you still fell out of reach, but just by an inch. if it were any better, it would be a 9.99999/10 to an 99.999999999999/100
I also loves how well it loops.
haha thanks, yeah most people say this song is a lot better too.
This deserves a best ever thing....
ALONG with weekly thing. this is great.
Thank you kind sir! :D
Journey (mk) 
